Could You Use Some Help Today

There's so many times I call on you for the needs of the day, Day or night you are always there when I kneel down to pray. So I thought with all the things you do I'd just call on you to say, Is there anything I can do for you to help you out today. If someone's having troubles I'd be willing to volunteer. If they need someone to listen I'd gladly lend my ear. If they're lonely, sick, or dying I'd be the friend they need that day. With all the work that's facing you,Lord Could you use some help today. I wonder if there are any times you feel you need to get away. I wonder if some prayers to you you would like to just delay. I know you are not the kind of God who will ever be dismayed, But I offer to you, that I'm willing to do whatever will help today.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/16/2013 5:23:00 PM
Avis, How are you this lovely evening? :-) Congratulations with having your awesome poem featured on the soups home page.... sending hugs. Hope you are enjoying this day with your family. always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 3/12/2013 9:23:00 AM
Hey Avis, the truth and honesty in the poem is so very touching. Reiterated what I could be and am not because of so many other constraints i have brought on myself....
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Date: 2/16/2012 4:17:00 AM
Another beautiful poem you have written. I do believe that He needs a lot of help. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 2/13/2012 12:11:00 PM
I was going to write a poem just like this? I find it so strange that things like this happen from time to time.X-celent write! I'm going to make it a Fav for me.(o:
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Date: 2/13/2012 3:18:00 PM
Many Thanks Dan for your comment. This is strange because I read one of your poems that was on my mind to write also. Guess our minds run on the same track. I'll have to look at yours again to see whitch it was. Avis
Date: 2/12/2012 2:53:00 AM
Dear Avis, Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. This poem you wrote is really beautiful with great rhythm and rhyming. God bless, Maureen
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Date: 2/12/2012 2:59:00 AM
Maureen, thank you, but I think we need some sleep---I keep making mistakes and can't get this poem written right. Ha Ha Avis
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