Could You

Could you believe in me,
In my dreams and all I want to be?

Could you mate my soul,
Even though life has taken its toll?

Could you forgive my past,
Since my mistakes have been many and my wrong turns vast?

Could you embrace all that I am,
Knowing that I’m weak and I can hardly stand?

Could you search my spirit,
Knowing it’s full of happiness each time you come near it?

Could you respect my what’s in my mind,
Even the jumbled thoughts you may find?

Could you believe in me,
And love every part of what you see?


-Mysty Rayn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Burton Avatar
August 2, 2008 at 12:49 PM
your talkin about someone who will accept you for your cons and pros nice way of putting that down. great poem.
Jordan Avatar
July 18, 2008 at 7:04 PM
this is my favorite form of poetry and you did a wonderful job with it - i do hope that you've found the type love your poem describes - well written piece - Blessings to you
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