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Could Love Overlook This Pain

I consider you my chief, at one point of time My commander at heart , leader of our military The big gun in our castle, but mental confusion Came upon my soul, heart and mind Disturbance was in the air, causing a big fluster Flurry thoughts came in my bubble, bursting illusions As, I tell myself, this can't be true, I know you You love me, and wouldn't destroy, our magnificent home Bringing tears , tears and tears How, could love overlook this pain This sudden burst, I'm feeling to, disappear far , far away Where no-one, would dare to stay or lay So, I may stay on my knees and pray Pray that this, bewilderment goes away Because, truthfully, I have only, one question Could love overlook this pain?

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Date: 10/15/2012 11:09:00 AM
Nicely done Delilah! You've brought out the emotions well - confusion and bewilderment often occur when someone we trust betrays us. Nice write!
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