Could It Be?

“Couldn’t we all just be right?”
At the hind end of the elephant holding its tail; the first blind man said.
“Rotten luck all of us being blind!” said the blind, seated man hugging a leg.
“Perhaps, this entity is a snake.” Said the skinny blind man squeezing the trunk.
“Every one knows there is only ONE!” screamed the blind child astride.
“Don’t holler at you’re elders.” The turbaned tail wiggler shouted.
“Everyone I know thinks there’s MANY”. Said the blind woman rubbing toenails.
“Unlikely, very unlikely,” they bickered.  “It’s a Snake.” “It’s a Tree”. “It’s a rope!” 
“Maybe we should ask IT.” Said the child, and she laughed till she fell off.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Winter Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 10:45 AM
awesome work Debbie gal. mail call : )) xoxoxo
Huggins Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 1:15 PM
This is a great acrostic! I love the message!... Sabrina
Doggett Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 5:29 PM
Very nice
Freeman Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 7:03 PM
Nice write Deborah! But to answer the poetic Queston, is another matter! Love jm You have mail!
Guzzi Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 10:20 AM
Carpe deum...also means...SEIZE GOD ;) Light & Love
Strand Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 1:16 AM
Nic one Debbie.Thank you for your welcome bog comments today .Rgds Brian
Goff Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 9:11 PM
intriguing write! Deb! nice! Jim
Pickett Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 5:36 PM
GREAT Acrostic poem.. I love this style... Thank you for sharing.....:JP)
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