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Could He Hear Me

Should I raise my hope and pray more, now that I’d lost almost everything to the shore? As I paddled my feet in the endless sea, I asked for mercy but could He hear me? And when I found myself drowning down, would He ignore me with a frown? To the alley of death I sunk down whole would He care and save this sinful soul? Within this hand, held a knife – that ever wondered where came the life. Déjà vu settled on the faded scar – that asked me how I made it this far… Though finally ended up at the start, dripped blood that parted the church from heart, that tore the spirit from heaven, left burning hell I asked for mercy, He just didn’t hear well…

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Date: 9/30/2011 1:48:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today as always Celine. I wish you a most enjoyable weekend with lots of sunshine and happy thoughts. Love, Carol
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