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In the write below i observe defects in a Plan.? In critical manner..Yet I am most Acceptive of all people.' And could be Described (as woke) by a1990s view ' I have not changed that much..Apart From seeing now, humanitys biggest Failing is intervention to an invasive Degree in everyday life..? Its probably the Inherited creation trait.' Coruupted by sin We over-engineer a demise.)

couden hove; a worst result '

Austo-Jappanese, I seem to hear some
Accent.? On an evil wind..No good.' Just bad
Scenes..Deception and many memes.' Descendant had he.? And are they happy.?
Living today.? In this world gone astray..
Kalergi is it allegory.? Are we a coizent
Humanity, are there plans in general more
Controlling from aouthouritys, are things
Bland and stale, yet also gory.? Can you see the actions? Do you read lifes signs ?
Am i alone in my awareness.? Is this pure
Accidental or could there be bad design?
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Rolland Avatar
December 18, 2025 at 9:58 PM
so interesting poem, with its final question, well penned and realistic, enjoyed
Maverick Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 1:09 PM
I appreciate your thought and comment dear Yann, An honour indeed.'
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