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Couch Potato You are sitting on my couch, now. You are watching TV with my kid. Yes, she is old enough to sit there. She is technically, All Grown Up! That is not the issue. Be careful, You are ever being… watched. For what? The way you are; What you do, What you see, What you think, How you act, How you react, How I can best dispose of the body. October is the best of months. So much happens. Harvest. The bringing in of the crops, leaves the soil… disturbed. It also makes it easy to dig. Gardening is a lot of fun. When I walked through to the kitchen, passing you, pawing my little girl like a wolf, on my sofa… you did not flinch, or use proper respect. Some have done this before. You are not the first. You, lol… Yes, I love to garden.

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Date: 11/1/2019 1:12:00 AM
oh goodness! this was such an awesome read esp. for a Halloween night! Great ending! lol
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Ann Foster
Date: 11/1/2019 1:15:00 AM
There was a previous poem, First Date... you might want to check out...hehe... This is kind of number two ... lol... have fun my friend. Blessed night to you. Ann
Date: 9/30/2019 10:22:00 AM
Had to come back for for another whirl. To the faves with this one. ;),
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Date: 9/30/2019 11:32:00 AM
You are so silly... I want to hug you twice too... Have the very nicest day... with tiny flowers, that no one else can see, as they are too busy. But we see... Ann
Date: 9/30/2019 12:02:00 AM
Oh so fabulously dark. This is really good. Thoroughly enjoyed. xomo
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Date: 9/30/2019 12:19:00 AM
hehe... I wrote it while I heard them laughing in the other room. He had not idea, how... things were really going... hehe... (have the nicest night my friend) Ann

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