Cotton Sky Tanaga

I slip on sapphire's sundress flowing like cool cotton sky. Golden stole sheathes bare shoulders as I glide on hammock clouds. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, August 29, 2012 for Hammock of Sky in Tanaga Contest (Nette Onclaud)
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September 15, 2012 at 11:09 PM
Hi Rhonda, a nice sweet Congratulations with your excellent win in Nette;s " HAMMOCK OF SKY IN TANAGA " beautiful contest. ~ :-) take care* PD
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September 15, 2012 at 5:51 PM
So descriptive a winning write..Enjoyed reading...Congrats..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 10:20 AM
wowie, how did I ever miss this sparkling gem? BIG congrats. this is superb.
Mannan Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 3:04 AM
Many congrats Rhonda for this beautiful write.
Poet Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 12:30 PM
An excellent Tanaga here Rhonda!Congrats on your big win!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 3:29 AM
A wonderful creative entry and winning poem. Congratulations Rhonda.
Horsman Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 2:55 PM
congrats Rhonda, this is beautiful
Guzzi Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 1:59 PM
a rich, full mind picture! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Harper Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 11:53 AM
Rhonda, very beautiful, I love how you wear the cottong sky--love all the motion! Congrat's on your win!
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September 12, 2012 at 9:40 AM
hammock in a sundress is incredible, rhonda... big cheers on your win in my contest!..:)
Squyres Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 9:05 AM
A hammok of cloud...feel it's softness !! Congrats on your win !!
Song Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 6:46 AM
Feeling the wind on my shoulders as I glide on this poetic hammock...you captured the senses in a big way, Rhonda! Wow...what a write! Enjoyed much. gwendolen
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September 12, 2012 at 6:13 AM
congratulations :) great poem!! whoaa
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September 12, 2012 at 6:03 AM
Congratulations on your stunning win Rhonda I have just looked at the winners list and it is full of my fave poets xx
Brown Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 5:26 AM
Finishing up packing for my vacation and thought I would take a break and congratulate the winners of the "Hammock" contest. Congratulations Rhonda. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 4:56 AM
congrats Rhonda on a wonderful win for a tremendous write with grand imagination luv ..
Gasun Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 1:10 AM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Rhonda!!! hugs:) leonora
K. Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 9:52 AM
I just read Russel's comment below and I heartily agree!! I wish more people could read this! This is a beautiful tanaga, so vividly written-- I like how you depicted the challenge hear-- if I were a painter (which sadly I am not)-- I could use this piece as an inspiration-- I could so picture a beautiful lady here... also thank you So much for what you said in your comments-you truly touched my heart with that. Thank you and sending you hugs as well.
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August 29, 2012 at 8:31 AM
I have to say Rhonda that I am surprised that you don't get more comments than you do(no offense to you!)...your poetry is truly exceptional and is extremely special! You are such a great poet I believe that many other poets are missing out in some truly awesome poetry! That's too bad too because you are so good! I really loved this wonderful poem that you have written! A very glorious write my friend! This is a stupendous piece, Great Work!!
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