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Cotton Sky Tanaga

I slip on sapphire's sundress flowing like cool cotton sky. Golden stole sheathes bare shoulders as I glide on hammock clouds. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, August 29, 2012 for Hammock of Sky in Tanaga Contest (Nette Onclaud)

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Date: 9/15/2012 11:09:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, a nice sweet Congratulations with your excellent win in Nette;s " HAMMOCK OF SKY IN TANAGA " beautiful contest. ~ :-) take care* PD
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Date: 9/15/2012 5:51:00 PM
So descriptive a winning write..Enjoyed reading...Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/15/2012 10:20:00 AM
wowie, how did I ever miss this sparkling gem? BIG congrats. this is superb.
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Date: 9/14/2012 3:04:00 AM
Many congrats Rhonda for this beautiful write.
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Date: 9/13/2012 12:30:00 PM
An excellent Tanaga here Rhonda!Congrats on your big win!!
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Date: 9/13/2012 3:29:00 AM
A wonderful creative entry and winning poem. Congratulations Rhonda.
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Date: 9/12/2012 2:55:00 PM
congrats Rhonda, this is beautiful
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Date: 9/12/2012 1:59:00 PM
a rich, full mind picture! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/12/2012 11:53:00 AM
Rhonda, very beautiful, I love how you wear the cottong sky--love all the motion! Congrat's on your win!
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Date: 9/12/2012 9:40:00 AM
hammock in a sundress is incredible, rhonda... big cheers on your win in my contest!..:)
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Date: 9/12/2012 9:05:00 AM
A hammok of cloud...feel it's softness !! Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 9/12/2012 6:46:00 AM
Feeling the wind on my shoulders as I glide on this poetic hammock...you captured the senses in a big way, Rhonda! Wow...what a write! Enjoyed much. gwendolen
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Date: 9/12/2012 6:13:00 AM
congratulations :) great poem!! whoaa
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Date: 9/12/2012 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your stunning win Rhonda I have just looked at the winners list and it is full of my fave poets xx
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Date: 9/12/2012 5:26:00 AM
Finishing up packing for my vacation and thought I would take a break and congratulate the winners of the "Hammock" contest. Congratulations Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2012 4:56:00 AM
congrats Rhonda on a wonderful win for a tremendous write with grand imagination luv ..
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Date: 9/12/2012 1:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Rhonda!!! hugs:) leonora
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Date: 9/1/2012 9:52:00 AM
I just read Russel's comment below and I heartily agree!! I wish more people could read this! This is a beautiful tanaga, so vividly written-- I like how you depicted the challenge hear-- if I were a painter (which sadly I am not)-- I could use this piece as an inspiration-- I could so picture a beautiful lady here... also thank you So much for what you said in your comments-you truly touched my heart with that. Thank you and sending you hugs as well.
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Date: 8/29/2012 8:31:00 AM
I have to say Rhonda that I am surprised that you don't get more comments than you do(no offense to you!)...your poetry is truly exceptional and is extremely special! You are such a great poet I believe that many other poets are missing out in some truly awesome poetry! That's too bad too because you are so good! I really loved this wonderful poem that you have written! A very glorious write my friend! This is a stupendous piece, Great Work!!
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