Laura Leiser Poet Rhyme

Cotton Dots

Have you seen those cotton dots 
fluffy spots, there’s quite a lot
have you seen those cotton dots 
up among the trees? 

Touch those fuzzy cotton dots 
pile them into bags and cots
soft white balls of silky knots
flowing in the breeze. 

Pick those cuddly cotton dots
weave them into shirts and socks 
spin to yarn, there’s quite a lot
up among the trees.

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Tom Valles November 12, 2025 at 9:03 PM So fun, picturesque and a terrific ode to cotton! ??Lovely work, Laura Laura Leiser November 13, 2025 at 9:37 AM Thank you, Tom. Glad you liked my “children’s” poem! :) Tom Valles November 12, 2025 at 9:06 PM Sorry for the typos, please disregard the two ?? in my comment. Not sure how they got in there

Kevin Leake October 31, 2025 at 11:55 AM nicely done Laura Enjoyed this piece Best wishes Kevin Laura Leiser October 31, 2025 at 12:08 PM Thank you, Kevin. I’m glad you liked this! :)