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Cotton Candy Dreams

With every drop of lemonade that walks me to the park I’m filled of cotton candy dreams which guide my easy gait The cardinals’ call of dawning bliss , no longer in the dark Arrives to serenade my dreams and I can hardly wait Today, another day to live, another day to taste I find I am a happy soul if I just let it be With all my cotton candy dreams, I promise not to waste Horizons are now limitless for all that I can see It’s then, I stop to look around in hues of blue and pink A soft and fluffy wonderland is there to bring to fore My feet are lifted by the breeze and this is what I think With not a drop of rain in sight who then could ask for more

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Charles Messina

Date: 10/23/2022 6:09:00 AM

Simple things are most heart-warming, as is this poem. "Cotton Candy Dreams" Love it! Happy Sunday, Mike. Keep writing my friend...always a pleasure to read! Charlie

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/23/2022 6:42:00 AM

Thanks so much Charlie!!

Michael Tor

Date: 10/19/2022 4:13:00 PM

Beautiful Mike we should be more thankful and this wonderful Poem of yours reminds us of that my friend...

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/19/2022 6:52:00 PM

I’m trying to be grateful for the simple things, PS is one of them, nice folks like you make it a great place!!!

Deb M

Date: 10/19/2022 2:42:00 AM

A beautiful poem of appreciation of lifes simple wondrous pleasures….love this Mike! Debx

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/19/2022 4:41:00 AM

Thanks so much Deb xxoo

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/18/2022 1:01:00 PM

Sweet and joyful as cotton candy Mike <3 I hope your day is filled with much joy and sweetness! You certainly blessed my day with this adorable happy write :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/19/2022 4:41:00 AM

Thank you BJ, I hope your Cotton Candy Dreams come true xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/17/2022 10:08:00 AM

Excellent poetry Mike 'With all my cotton........for all that I can see' - such a fantastic imagination. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/18/2022 5:23:00 AM

Thanks much Jennifer xxoo

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/17/2022 9:13:00 AM

An easing poem of going with the flow in life. Very nice Mike :) xxoo

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/17/2022 9:36:00 AM

Thanks so much Heidi!

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/17/2022 6:39:00 AM

It's the simple pleasures in life that we most often overlook. You don't take those things for granted, Mike. I've always wondered why cotton candy isn't made in other colors. Is it a boy/girl color thing?

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/17/2022 9:35:00 AM

You know, I’m not sure but it always evokes fun time as a child!!