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Cotton Candy Clouds

Cotton candy clouds Crossed an azure sky, Me, I leant against a wall And watched them passing by. High above the fells they were, Adrift upon a sea. They sailed the breeze, as gossamer Towards their destiny.

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/18/2017 10:19:00 AM

Beautiful imagery; loved the flow of this piece, as well.

Gary Smith
Date: 7/18/2017 10:37:00 AM

Thank you M.L. :)

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 7/16/2017 3:34:00 AM

Perfect imagery. How I love to watch the clouds float by.

Gary Smith
Date: 7/16/2017 4:22:00 AM

Thank you Elizabeth :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2017 6:45:00 PM

Such wonderful imagery your poem is absolutely delightful Gary:-) hugs jan xx

Gary Smith
Date: 7/15/2017 6:51:00 PM

Thank you Jan :)

Silent One

Date: 7/15/2017 10:26:00 AM

This is simple, but great imagery.. You create so much in such little words..

Gary Smith
Date: 7/15/2017 10:43:00 AM

Thank you S.O :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/15/2017 6:38:00 AM

I love this Gary. I can relate to this, as I wrote a poem with that title a long time ago too. We are on the same wavelength with our appreciation for nature :)

Gary Smith
Date: 7/15/2017 6:41:00 AM

Thank you Heidi, yes I think we are :)