Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

Cotton Candy Clouds

Cotton candy clouds

Crossed an azure sky,

Me, I leant against a wall

And watched them passing by.

High above the fells they were,

Adrift upon a sea.

They sailed the breeze, as gossamer

Towards their destiny.

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M. L. Kiser July 18, 2017 at 10:19 AM Beautiful imagery; loved the flow of this piece, as well. Gary Smith July 18, 2017 at 10:37 AM Thank you M.L. :)

Elizabeth Kinch July 16, 2017 at 3:34 AM Perfect imagery. How I love to watch the clouds float by. Gary Smith July 16, 2017 at 4:22 AM Thank you Elizabeth :)

Jan Allison July 15, 2017 at 6:45 PM Such wonderful imagery your poem is absolutely delightful Gary:-) hugs jan xx Gary Smith July 15, 2017 at 6:51 PM Thank you Jan :)

Silent One July 15, 2017 at 10:26 AM This is simple, but great imagery.. You create so much in such little words.. Gary Smith July 15, 2017 at 10:43 AM Thank you S.O :)

Heidi Sands July 15, 2017 at 6:38 AM I love this Gary. I can relate to this, as I wrote a poem with that title a long time ago too. We are on the same wavelength with our appreciation for nature :) Gary Smith July 15, 2017 at 6:41 AM Thank you Heidi, yes I think we are :)