Cottage country

The loon glides with grace
Its haunting call echoing across the lake
The sun about to set ~



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 1st place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Cunningham Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 12:32 PM
Can just hear it's cries, I added a bit of mist to the image in my head.
Gauthier Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 3:48 PM
Perfect, Tom. Thanks.
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