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Costume Party

DJ p l a y s music host w e a r s costume waiter s e r v e s drinks chef p r e p a r e d food death s e i z e s butler * I just discovered this form from a recent contest. I wrote it in the spirit of Halloween. Have happy a weekend and stay safe:-) Alexis Alexis Y. 10/30/2020

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/3/2020 7:50:00 AM

A very different Halloween poem which I thought was, extremely creative. Your short lines gave it rhythm - shame the Butler didn't get to enjoy the evening. Great write my friend Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/31/2020 7:25:00 PM

Alexis, I enjoyed the Halloween spirit of your wonderful write, especially the grim twist at the end - poor butler - didn't see that one coming! Love when that happens! :)) ..that is, a poem with a great end twist.. not the dead butler..lol! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan P.S. Happy Halloween too!!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/31/2020 2:44:00 AM

wow what a picture you made in so few words!:-) hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/31/2020 2:00:00 AM

Great composition of short lines. ~~

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/30/2020 8:43:00 PM

It could have been an arriving guest. Oh, my! :0 Great Halloween fun, Alexis. Have a nice weekend.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/30/2020 3:43:00 PM

I like this costume party--well done, Alexis.

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/30/2020 6:00:00 PM

Hi Vijay, I appreciate that you stopped by. Have a wonderful weekend my friend:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/30/2020 2:51:00 PM

A grisly end to what should have been a happy occasion. Enjoy your weekend Alexis Tom

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/30/2020 6:01:00 PM

Hi Tom, I wrote it with Halloween in mind. Thanks for stopping by. Enjoy your weekend as well:-) Alexis

Silent One

Date: 10/30/2020 2:23:00 PM

You did this very well .

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/31/2020 8:28:00 AM

Hi Silent, Thank you so much. Did you see my latest poem? Happy Halloween my friend:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/30/2020 6:02:00 PM

Hi Silent. Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by. Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2020 2:21:00 PM

- A fun form ... I discovered it today :) ... - A great costume party, Alixis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/30/2020 6:02:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, This form is amazing. Thanks for stopping by. Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis