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Cosmos Dance

Wind careless whisper, leads me to peer To run... view: a play of cosmos dance Feet - glued on this one enchanting trance Momentum of crescendo Filling me with all tempo Awesome divertimento On ocean blue, dolphins leap and hop School of fish swims to form a line dance Jellies jig and wave in modern pop Gentle breeze sways leaves of trees Lush leaves swing on teeming green Bearing fruits of finest genes Butterflies tango to petals bulbs Bees waltz sucking nectarine from buds Blossoms jazz bloomed on big pinky reds Deer leads the flamenco band Squired by birds tweeting on land Mused fireflies mambo so grand Fluffy clouds in cha-cha during day Sunshine smiles in frug of golden rays Bossa Nova rolls a soothing play One-step day ends, night jives win Moon and stars folk dance veils shin Classic world in riant grin (c) Olive Eloisa 7:14 pm MAy 20, 2014 Sponsor Poet Destroyer A Contest Name it's all about nature #3 9th place.. :D

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/10/2014 4:05:00 PM

Olive, lol...back here again... Are you hitting my notifications ... sweet

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2014 5:22:00 PM

No problem Olive, i love supporting all...Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 3:56:00 PM

thanks so sweet Linda.. :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/28/2014 10:42:00 PM

This poem is an image feast. One most delightful!!! Bravo!!!!!! Congrats on the win!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/29/2014 3:12:00 PM

Thanks much Robert..:) I enjoyed reading your comment as I enjoyed writing this..:)

Keith Robson

Date: 5/28/2014 4:45:00 AM

Beautiful imagery in a beautiful poem Olive, I add my congratulations on the win also...Keith.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/28/2014 2:31:00 PM

Thank you so much keith

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/27/2014 6:51:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this wonderful write on nature, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/28/2014 2:29:00 PM

Thank you so much sir .. GBU

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/26/2014 1:23:00 PM

This is a delightful poem, Olive! I really enjoyed watching all of nature dancing so happily together. Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/26/2014 5:16:00 PM

Thank you KElly.. :) when I made this I was listening to a dancing tune.. :D lools and somehow I have this idea.. lol a world of fantasy.. :) and I imagine the scene from Snow white.. :) while she is singing in the forest.. :D GBU :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/25/2014 9:56:00 PM

Hi Olive, again... thanks for the comment, and the sweet thanks... I'm still enjoying the sight of butterflies... Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/29/2014 5:19:00 PM

Thank you very much... :) GBU

Tim Smith

Date: 5/25/2014 3:58:00 PM

I love how you brought nature through the wonderful dances..congrats on the win...hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/25/2014 4:50:00 PM

Thanks Tim for the drop by.. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/25/2014 12:44:00 PM

Olive,, Congratulations, I hope you enjoy your win and placement. Stop by my blog, "Petals in the Wind" if you like. Have a sweet Sunday.... XOX~ Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/25/2014 4:55:00 PM

thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2014 7:47:00 PM

ha I enjoyed this poem Olive, blooms well...Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 6:11:00 AM

Thanks much LInda.. :D

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2014 5:56:00 AM

Love the dances set to poetic expression..Enjoyed reading this one today.Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 6:08:00 AM

thanks much Sara.. :) GBU

Paul Callus

Date: 5/20/2014 5:43:00 PM

Hi Olive_eloi.....after the comments by the three capable critics below, what else am I supposed to say, except...may I have the next dance, please :)))

Paul Callus
Date: 5/25/2014 1:13:00 PM

...anything, as long as you do not wear me out!!....oh! congrats on your win :))

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 6:11:00 AM

hahha PAul will be glad to have a dance with you.. :D can we do the boogie.. :P lool

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/20/2014 4:53:00 PM

Dear Olive, this is quite a creative and lovely "dance." It's filled with amazing imagery, and my favorite line is "Butterflies tango to petals' bulbs." If this is for a contest, I'm sure you'll do well. Love, carolyn

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 6:10:00 AM

your words are too kind CArolyn.. :D GBU and thanks for the drop by.. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2014 4:07:00 PM

so cute how you got the different dance styles into this one. This is a rhyming poem but not triolet. anyway, I sure enjoyed it. luv, Andrea

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 2:29:00 PM

Thanks Andrea for the correction.. I appreciate it much..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/20/2014 1:13:00 PM

this piece takes center stage with nature in a swirl of a dance, olive.. you wow me!..huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 6:09:00 AM

thanks much Nette.. :) GBU