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Cosmos Dance

Wind careless whisper, leads me to peer
To run... view: a play of cosmos dance
Feet - glued on this one enchanting trance

Momentum of crescendo
Filling me with all tempo
Awesome divertimento

On ocean blue, dolphins leap and hop
School of fish swims to form a line dance
Jellies jig and wave in modern pop

Gentle breeze sways leaves of trees
Lush leaves swing on teeming green
Bearing fruits of finest genes

Butterflies tango to petals bulbs
Bees waltz sucking nectarine from buds
Blossoms jazz bloomed on big pinky reds

Deer leads the flamenco band
Squired by birds tweeting on land
Mused fireflies mambo so grand

Fluffy clouds in cha-cha during day
Sunshine smiles in frug of golden rays
Bossa Nova rolls a soothing play

One-step day ends, night jives win
Moon and stars folk dance veils shin
Classic world in riant grin

(c) Olive Eloisa
7:14 pm
MAy 20, 2014

Sponsor	Poet Destroyer A
Contest Name	it's all about nature #3 
9th place.. :D

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2014

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/10/2014 4:05:00 PM Olive, lol...back here again... Are you hitting my notifications ... sweet Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/29/2014 5:22:00 PM No problem Olive, i love supporting all...Linda Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2014 3:56:00 PM thanks so sweet Linda.. :)

Robert Lindley Date: 5/28/2014 10:42:00 PM This poem is an image feast. One most delightful!!! Bravo!!!!!! Congrats on the win!!! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/29/2014 3:12:00 PM Thanks much Robert..:) I enjoyed reading your comment as I enjoyed writing this..:)

Keith Robson Date: 5/28/2014 4:45:00 AM Beautiful imagery in a beautiful poem Olive, I add my congratulations on the win also...Keith. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/28/2014 2:31:00 PM Thank you so much keith

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/27/2014 6:51:00 AM Congratulations on the win with this wonderful write on nature, Olive Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/28/2014 2:29:00 PM Thank you so much sir .. GBU

Kelly Deschler Date: 5/26/2014 1:23:00 PM This is a delightful poem, Olive! I really enjoyed watching all of nature dancing so happily together. Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/26/2014 5:16:00 PM Thank you KElly.. :) when I made this I was listening to a dancing tune.. :D lools and somehow I have this idea.. lol a world of fantasy.. :) and I imagine the scene from Snow white.. :) while she is singing in the forest.. :D GBU :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/25/2014 9:56:00 PM Hi Olive, again... thanks for the comment, and the sweet thanks... I'm still enjoying the sight of butterflies... Linda Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/29/2014 5:19:00 PM Thank you very much... :) GBU

Tim Smith Date: 5/25/2014 3:58:00 PM I love how you brought nature through the wonderful dances..congrats on the win...hugs Tim Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/25/2014 4:50:00 PM Thanks Tim for the drop by.. :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/25/2014 12:44:00 PM Olive,, Congratulations, I hope you enjoy your win and placement. Stop by my blog, "Petals in the Wind" if you like. Have a sweet Sunday.... XOX~ Linda Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/25/2014 4:55:00 PM thank you.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/21/2014 7:47:00 PM ha I enjoyed this poem Olive, blooms well...Linda Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/22/2014 6:11:00 AM Thanks much LInda.. :D

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/21/2014 5:56:00 AM Love the dances set to poetic expression..Enjoyed reading this one today.Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/22/2014 6:08:00 AM thanks much Sara.. :) GBU

Paul Callus Date: 5/20/2014 5:43:00 PM Hi Olive_eloi.....after the comments by the three capable critics below, what else am I supposed to say, except...may I have the next dance, please :))) Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 5/25/2014 1:13:00 PM ...anything, as long as you do not wear me out!!....oh! congrats on your win :)) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/22/2014 6:11:00 AM hahha PAul will be glad to have a dance with you.. :D can we do the boogie.. :P lool

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/20/2014 4:53:00 PM Dear Olive, this is quite a creative and lovely "dance." It's filled with amazing imagery, and my favorite line is "Butterflies tango to petals' bulbs." If this is for a contest, I'm sure you'll do well. Love, carolyn Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/22/2014 6:10:00 AM your words are too kind CArolyn.. :D GBU and thanks for the drop by.. :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/20/2014 4:07:00 PM so cute how you got the different dance styles into this one. This is a rhyming poem but not triolet. anyway, I sure enjoyed it. luv, Andrea Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/22/2014 2:29:00 PM Thanks Andrea for the correction.. I appreciate it much..

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/20/2014 1:13:00 PM this piece takes center stage with nature in a swirl of a dance, olive.. you wow me!..huggs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/22/2014 6:09:00 AM thanks much Nette.. :) GBU