Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Rhyme

Cosmos Dance

Wind careless whisper, leads me to peer
To run... view: a play of cosmos dance
Feet - glued on this one enchanting trance

Momentum of crescendo
Filling me with all tempo
Awesome divertimento

On ocean blue, dolphins leap and hop
School of fish swims to form a line dance
Jellies jig and wave in modern pop

Gentle breeze sways leaves of trees
Lush leaves swing on teeming green
Bearing fruits of finest genes

Butterflies tango to petals bulbs
Bees waltz sucking nectarine from buds
Blossoms jazz bloomed on big pinky reds

Deer leads the flamenco band
Squired by birds tweeting on land
Mused fireflies mambo so grand

Fluffy clouds in cha-cha during day
Sunshine smiles in frug of golden rays
Bossa Nova rolls a soothing play

One-step day ends, night jives win
Moon and stars folk dance veils shin
Classic world in riant grin

(c) Olive Eloisa
7:14 pm
MAy 20, 2014

Sponsor	Poet Destroyer A
Contest Name	it's all about nature #3 
9th place.. :D

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Poet Destroyer A June 10, 2014 at 4:05 PM Olive, lol...back here again... Are you hitting my notifications ... sweet

Poet Destroyer A May 29, 2014 at 5:22 PM No problem Olive, i love supporting all...Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 3:56 PM thanks so sweet Linda.. :)

Robert Lindley May 28, 2014 at 10:42 PM This poem is an image feast. One most delightful!!! Bravo!!!!!! Congrats on the win!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 29, 2014 at 3:12 PM Thanks much Robert..:) I enjoyed reading your comment as I enjoyed writing this..:)

Keith Robson May 28, 2014 at 4:45 AM Beautiful imagery in a beautiful poem Olive, I add my congratulations on the win also...Keith. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 28, 2014 at 2:31 PM Thank you so much keith

Dr.Ram Mehta May 27, 2014 at 6:51 AM Congratulations on the win with this wonderful write on nature, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 28, 2014 at 2:29 PM Thank you so much sir .. GBU

Kelly Deschler May 26, 2014 at 1:23 PM This is a delightful poem, Olive! I really enjoyed watching all of nature dancing so happily together. Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 26, 2014 at 5:16 PM Thank you KElly.. :) when I made this I was listening to a dancing tune.. :D lools and somehow I have this idea.. lol a world of fantasy.. :) and I imagine the scene from Snow white.. :) while she is singing in the forest.. :D GBU :)

Poet Destroyer A May 25, 2014 at 9:56 PM Hi Olive, again... thanks for the comment, and the sweet thanks... I'm still enjoying the sight of butterflies... Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 29, 2014 at 5:19 PM Thank you very much... :) GBU

Tim Smith May 25, 2014 at 3:58 PM I love how you brought nature through the wonderful dances..congrats on the win...hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 25, 2014 at 4:50 PM Thanks Tim for the drop by.. :)

Poet Destroyer A May 25, 2014 at 12:44 PM Olive,, Congratulations, I hope you enjoy your win and placement. Stop by my blog, "Petals in the Wind" if you like. Have a sweet Sunday.... XOX~ Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 25, 2014 at 4:55 PM thank you.

Poet Destroyer A May 21, 2014 at 7:47 PM ha I enjoyed this poem Olive, blooms well...Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 6:11 AM Thanks much LInda.. :D

Sara Kendrick May 21, 2014 at 5:56 AM Love the dances set to poetic expression..Enjoyed reading this one today.Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 6:08 AM thanks much Sara.. :) GBU

Paul Callus May 20, 2014 at 5:43 PM Hi Olive_eloi.....after the comments by the three capable critics below, what else am I supposed to say, except...may I have the next dance, please :))) Paul Callus May 25, 2014 at 1:13 PM ...anything, as long as you do not wear me out!!....oh! congrats on your win :)) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 6:11 AM hahha PAul will be glad to have a dance with you.. :D can we do the boogie.. :P lool

Carolyn Devonshire May 20, 2014 at 4:53 PM Dear Olive, this is quite a creative and lovely "dance." It's filled with amazing imagery, and my favorite line is "Butterflies tango to petals' bulbs." If this is for a contest, I'm sure you'll do well. Love, carolyn Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 6:10 AM your words are too kind CArolyn.. :D GBU and thanks for the drop by.. :)

Andrea Dietrich May 20, 2014 at 4:07 PM so cute how you got the different dance styles into this one. This is a rhyming poem but not triolet. anyway, I sure enjoyed it. luv, Andrea Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 2:29 PM Thanks Andrea for the correction.. I appreciate it much..

Nette Onclaud May 20, 2014 at 1:13 PM this piece takes center stage with nature in a swirl of a dance, olive.. you wow me!..huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 6:09 AM thanks much Nette.. :) GBU