Cosmic Strife

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" COSMIC STRIFE" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, ©

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No wonder Man peace in his heart is difficult to find For cosmic strife in his soul has succeeded to hind ! © Demetrios Trifiatis 19 April 2018

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Maria Williams

Date: 4/19/2018 7:43:00 AM

Cosmic strife can well cause the equilibrium of man's peace to unbalance - The Cosmos will give strength to find it again...Well said my dearest friend ~ Maria xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/19/2018 11:44:00 AM

The equilibrium is achieved after the strife has reached its highest point . Thank you for your precious comment my friend, Maria xxx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/19/2018 7:28:00 AM

Yet we sometimes allow that strife to hinder our souls, one of our many failings. Tom.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/19/2018 11:36:00 AM

sometimes, yes, and other times invigorates it dear, Tom! Haha. Thank you my friend!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/19/2018 6:40:00 AM

Turmoil man has in daily life..needs colors in his heart ..beautiful colors on your roof, Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/19/2018 11:34:00 AM

Thank you dear friend, Vijay for your lovely comment!

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/19/2018 5:23:00 AM

Wonder what caused the strife...Al the best Demetrios...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/19/2018 6:30:00 AM

Necessity was the reason my friend, Arturo! Necessity to keep things going! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2018 3:23:00 AM

- Always have a open heart ... learn to forgive ... learn to love ... man will have peace - Lovely written, dear Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/19/2018 6:32:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely visit my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx