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Cosmic Karma

I traverse the oceans within a breeze I light my way holding burning trees Freeing my body, my heart, my soul I talk and walk through miles and roads I view the future with discernable need Yet I succumb to my fate with noted heed Do I lack the courage to go beyond my whole? Do I feel the need to remain stagnant and tole? I lack conviction in my sturdy brain Trying to fight these excuses so lame Solitary in my endeavours I so create My weakness I continually berate In my minds eye I spy this epic infused In a twilight of colours I discover loosed Yet I traverse the oceans within a breeze And light my way holding burning trees . . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/17/2009 1:15:00 AM
Nicely done. Sara
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Date: 6/9/2009 9:47:00 AM
Love those last two lines. Strong introspection here. Don't be too hard on yourself now. We do what we can. Beautiful write. Love, Shar
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Date: 6/9/2009 6:08:00 AM
Dude:So Cosmic-ish :p Love it:)
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