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Cosmic Dreams Unveiled

Written: August 23, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ Milky Way on plate, wish on shooting star's embrace~ Venus grants a kiss. Autumn leaves so bright crisp and colorful, they dance~ underneath my feet full moon's heartbeat shines stars in joy across the void~ bright, hushed dreams unveiled whispers guide me near quietly, you lead me through~ heart's chamber, my home eternal echoes I still love you, but have learned~ Love is setting free
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Narain Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 10:47 AM
Nice poem, Sotto.
Magdalinos Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 7:34 AM
Dear Sotto,a very nice poem!! Have a Blessed day, my friend!
Volumes Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 11:44 PM
Some time dreams can be closer to reality than life itself. The image of frolicking with fallen Autumn leaves, and letting go in order to truly love. If your love has to tie, don't try, say goodbye. Las you have composed a symphony of words from a dream. Exquisite
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