Cosmic

She is my cosmic flame; the stars, the moon and the sun all in one.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/13/2025 4:24:00 PM

romantic ~

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/29/2025 11:25:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your creative/great "Cosmic" write again. Have a blessed day with your win.............

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/29/2025 9:06:00 AM

She's very lucky.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2025 6:26:00 AM

VERY nice, Robert. Way to go in the contest

Ink Empress

Date: 5/29/2025 2:47:00 AM

This is a beautiful and very heartfelt take on the prompt dear robert, i love the way your words flow so seamlessly and also how youv used the word cosmic, which is what i was thinking of as i set this word as a prompt! Very passionate and soulful take, thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your top win! Sending you light

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/15/2025 11:49:00 AM

What a creative/great "Cosmic" write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a lovely day writing away..........

Tom Woody

Date: 5/15/2025 7:18:00 AM

Great one liner and just the way I feel about my gal