Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

Corn Emerges

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                                                    Crow sentinel watch
                                      Caw, caw, remove beak fly____boom
                                                 Tail feathers float down

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Debbie Guzzi May 21, 2010 at 3:02 PM Love the tail line LOL Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 17, 2010 at 9:38 PM Cool entry for Charles's contest Sara.. u have this Strict Haiku format down pat.. good luck if u enter... am leaving this afternoon.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

David Byrne May 16, 2010 at 6:13 PM that's good!

John Freeman May 16, 2010 at 12:39 PM Yea, I get the picture Sara. Sad day for the Crow. Agape, Moses

Gert W. Knop May 16, 2010 at 3:45 AM Nicely written Haiku, Sara! Yes, you're right, many words in German are much longer than the English ones, what makes German more difficult (but that's nothing with e.g. Hungarian!!!). Have a nice Sunday and new week ahead...Gert

Doris Culverhouse May 15, 2010 at 7:30 PM did he get another one? funny

Poet Destroyer A May 15, 2010 at 10:11 AM well done on the haiku, have yourself a good one Sara,..p.d.

Danny Nunn May 15, 2010 at 7:40 AM Some body told them the stories about scare crows and now they fear them no more...good write..Danny

James Peranteau May 15, 2010 at 6:59 AM smart poem Sara...a lil' laugh for those who desperately try to get a few ears of the yellow stuff each year, and find those black hungry birds beat us to it ! james

Carolyn Devonshire May 15, 2010 at 6:28 AM Very, very cool, Sara! I like the concept of a "crow sentinel" waiting for the corn to appear and then striking. Awesome! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick May 15, 2010 at 6:21 AM My husband has planted corn three times and has tried everything to keep the crows out of the corn patch but they are winning...We don't have a stalk of corn standing..