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Corn Emerges

. Crow sentinel watch Caw, caw, remove beak fly____boom Tail feathers float down

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/21/2010 3:02:00 PM

Love the tail line LOL Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/17/2010 9:38:00 PM

Cool entry for Charles's contest Sara.. u have this Strict Haiku format down pat.. good luck if u enter... am leaving this afternoon.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

David Byrne

Date: 5/16/2010 6:13:00 PM

that's good!

John Freeman

Date: 5/16/2010 12:39:00 PM

Yea, I get the picture Sara. Sad day for the Crow. Agape, Moses

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/16/2010 3:45:00 AM

Nicely written Haiku, Sara! Yes, you're right, many words in German are much longer than the English ones, what makes German more difficult (but that's nothing with e.g. Hungarian!!!). Have a nice Sunday and new week ahead...Gert

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/15/2010 7:30:00 PM

did he get another one? funny

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/15/2010 10:11:00 AM

well done on the haiku, have yourself a good one Sara,..p.d.

Danny Nunn

Date: 5/15/2010 7:40:00 AM

Some body told them the stories about scare crows and now they fear them no more...good write..Danny

James Peranteau

Date: 5/15/2010 6:59:00 AM

smart poem Sara...a lil' laugh for those who desperately try to get a few ears of the yellow stuff each year, and find those black hungry birds beat us to it ! james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/15/2010 6:28:00 AM

Very, very cool, Sara! I like the concept of a "crow sentinel" waiting for the corn to appear and then striking. Awesome! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2010 6:21:00 AM

My husband has planted corn three times and has tried everything to keep the crows out of the corn patch but they are winning...We don't have a stalk of corn standing..