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i'm a belly barrel full of wine but i've been laying down all this time so don't drink from me as i do you even though i'm well aged now vintage i have soured

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Date: 11/23/2019 11:32:00 AM
Good use of metaphor!
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/23/2019 5:55:00 PM
Thank you Musing.

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