Corked

i'm a belly
barrel full
of wine

but i've
been laying
down

all this
time so
don't

drink
from
me

as 
i do
you

even though
i'm well aged
now vintage

i
have
soured
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November 23, 2019 at 11:32 AM
Good use of metaphor!
Connelly Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 5:55 PM
Thank you Musing.
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