Core of My Universe

Feel my heart in your chest
It's beating, it's alive
It's saying " I love you"
Dry my tears with your lips
You'll taste my happiness
Luckily, we are true blue

Be my harbour, and my home
My idol and my oath
Be the best words in my head
See the oceans in my eyes
Touch the heaven in my arms
You are the core of my universe

I draw a constellation with your moles
Without you, my heart's a black hole
Without you, I'm an empty space
We were created from star dust
My mom is Venus,she said that love
is the core of our universe

Be my knowledge and my force
My answer and my source
Be the best thing in my life
See the forests in my eyes
Touch the deserts in my arms
You are the core of my universe

I don't need to speak
I don't need to see
I know you can feel it in your heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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September 21, 2018 at 5:17 AM
Heard the song, love it..
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June 10, 2018 at 2:39 AM
My friend (Vlada Pekh) and I wrote a song using this poem: https://soundcloud.com/rona-kranker/core-of-my-universe
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May 7, 2018 at 12:07 PM
Hello Alisa, it s a really deep and lovely poem, really enjoyable one to read good luck
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June 10, 2018 at 2:40 AM
Thanks, Faraz!))) All the love to you xx
Swartz Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 1:50 PM
A very deep and wonderful poem with such beautiful imagery and thought. A perfect poem you gave us Alisa.
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May 6, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Thanks for lovely words. I'll take part in that competition. I'll introduce this poem as lyrics))
Swartz Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 4:01 PM
I do think if you entered it in the right contest you would have a great chance at winning it. You should check to see if there are any contests for this piece right now.
Balaieva Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 3:58 PM
Hi James) Your words as usual are so nice and kind. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. How do you think do I have any chance to attract judge's attention in one competition with that poem? Anyway, have a lovely day xx
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April 10, 2018 at 2:17 PM
Hello Alisa, you have written a beautiful poem. I have enjoyed reading. have a nice day my friend.
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April 14, 2018 at 3:59 PM
Good evening dear Darlene, It's a great honour for me to read such amazing words from you. It's a real big deal!)) All the best xx
Evans Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 1:02 PM
A heartfelt poem. "Touch the deserts in my arms" is very nice.
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April 9, 2018 at 4:15 AM
Thanks Richard. Have a lovely day))
One Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 1:23 PM
Yes I really like it..
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April 3, 2018 at 9:38 AM
I hope you both can feel it together.. Beautiful poem Alisa..
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April 3, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Do you really like it? I'm glad and I feel honoured)) Thanks for kind words. All the love from Ukraine xx
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