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garden in my coral dream showcases roses and violets, gorgeous flowers swaying, fluttering petals in misty breeze, intoxicated birds croon to each other, are they love-sick! February 8, 2022 Syllables (16-15-15) checked by HMS.com For "Roses are red, violets are blue - a valentine challenge in one of five ways" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich THIRD PLACE For Brian Strand - 1074 Poetry Contest FIRST PLACE

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/16/2022 9:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write/picture. Few words with much said. Have a great/blessed day..............

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/16/2022 9:46:00 AM

Thanks, Paula. Appreciate your beautiful encouraging comment.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 2/16/2022 1:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with a beautiful poem.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/16/2022 9:45:00 AM

Thanks, Subimal. Appreciate your kind comment.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/14/2022 7:39:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win in Andera’s contest. Happy Valentin's Day :) Blessings my friend

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/16/2022 9:45:00 AM

Thanks, Eve. Appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2022 6:27:00 PM

Such lovely imagery. The last line was wonderful. I would have made it a question!! Congrats in my contest, Mala

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/14/2022 8:19:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. I am honoured.

Jcb Brul

Date: 2/8/2022 3:21:00 PM

Great penning! Lovely picture in enchanting colours. Sam is right, you use colours so effectively in your images. All d best dear Mala.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/8/2022 4:18:00 PM

Dear JCB, Thank you so much. So glad you are back. Truly appreciate your thoughtful comments.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/8/2022 1:53:00 PM

Outstanding writing, dearest, Mala! Enjoyed your creation. Good luck!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/8/2022 4:17:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Poet. Really appreciate your kind comment.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/8/2022 12:50:00 PM

Beautifully penned.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/8/2022 4:16:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Poet. Really appreciate your lovely comment.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/8/2022 11:31:00 AM

I think I like your dreams Mala. You always use color so effectively in your images! You have risen to the challenge wonderfully dear friend! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings of sweet slumber in technicolor!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/8/2022 4:16:00 PM

Oh Sam, you are too kind! Really appreciate this comment coming from a brilliant poet.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/8/2022 11:05:00 AM

Oh, very beautiful, Malabika.Blessings. good luck in the contest.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/8/2022 4:14:00 PM

Thank you, Eve. really appreciate your lovely comment.