Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Sijo

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Coral Dream

garden in my coral dream showcases roses and violets, 
             gorgeous flowers swaying, fluttering petals in misty breeze, 
               intoxicated birds croon to each other, are they love-sick!



                                          February 8, 2022
                         Syllables (16-15-15) checked by HMS.com
For "Roses are red, violets are blue - a valentine challenge in one of five ways" Poetry Contest 
                                     Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
                                           THIRD PLACE

                           For Brian Strand - 1074 Poetry Contest
                                            FIRST PLACE

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Paula Goldsmith February 16, 2022 at 9:14 AM Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write/picture. Few words with much said. Have a great/blessed day.............. Malabika Ray Choudhury February 16, 2022 at 9:46 AM Thanks, Paula. Appreciate your beautiful encouraging comment.

Subimal Sinha-Roy February 16, 2022 at 1:50 AM Congratulations on your win with a beautiful poem. Malabika Ray Choudhury February 16, 2022 at 9:45 AM Thanks, Subimal. Appreciate your kind comment.

Eve Roper February 14, 2022 at 7:39 PM Back with congratulations on your win in Andera’s contest. Happy Valentin's Day :) Blessings my friend Malabika Ray Choudhury February 16, 2022 at 9:45 AM Thanks, Eve. Appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2022 at 6:27 PM Such lovely imagery. The last line was wonderful. I would have made it a question!! Congrats in my contest, Mala Malabika Ray Choudhury February 14, 2022 at 8:19 AM Thanks, Andrea. I am honoured.

JC Brul February 8, 2022 at 3:21 PM Great penning! Lovely picture in enchanting colours. Sam is right, you use colours so effectively in your images. All d best dear Mala. Malabika Ray Choudhury February 8, 2022 at 4:18 PM Dear JCB, Thank you so much. So glad you are back. Truly appreciate your thoughtful comments.

Demetrios Trifiatis February 8, 2022 at 1:53 PM Outstanding writing, dearest, Mala! Enjoyed your creation. Good luck! Malabika Ray Choudhury February 8, 2022 at 4:17 PM Thank you, Dear Poet. Really appreciate your kind comment.

M. L. Kiser February 8, 2022 at 12:50 PM Beautifully penned. Malabika Ray Choudhury February 8, 2022 at 4:16 PM Thank you, Dear Poet. Really appreciate your lovely comment.

Sam Kauffman February 8, 2022 at 11:31 AM I think I like your dreams Mala. You always use color so effectively in your images! You have risen to the challenge wonderfully dear friend! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings of sweet slumber in technicolor! Malabika Ray Choudhury February 8, 2022 at 4:16 PM Oh Sam, you are too kind! Really appreciate this comment coming from a brilliant poet.

Eve Roper February 8, 2022 at 11:05 AM Oh, very beautiful, Malabika.Blessings. good luck in the contest. Malabika Ray Choudhury February 8, 2022 at 4:14 PM Thank you, Eve. really appreciate your lovely comment.