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Coquettish

shadowed wane moon smiles
eye-catching incandescent 
north star smitten ebbs

6/16/2018

imagerylovemoonmusehaiku

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Gershon Wolf

June 18, 2018 at 11:40 PM

As good as a haiku gets, methinks. Love the 'wane moon smiles' juxtaposed with the North Star's ebb. Really works for me! :) gw

Probir Gupta

June 18, 2018 at 12:34 PM

This is captivating ... Lovely ...

Andrea Dietrich

June 17, 2018 at 5:18 PM

Such a lovely picture, Eve!

Mike Gentile

June 17, 2018 at 8:30 AM

Beautiful, This was my view last evening as I gazed on high. Lovely poem Happy Sunday xx00

Eve Roper

June 17, 2018 at 9:28 AM

Thank you, Mike, :) yes, it was my view too, that is where I got the inspiration for the poem. :) Hugs Eve ~' *

Heidi Sands

June 17, 2018 at 7:54 AM

This is beautiful to perfection Eve :)

Eve Roper

June 17, 2018 at 9:25 AM

Thank you,Heidi :) for the Perfection,, you know how to put a smile on my face. Hugs Eve ~' *

Richard Lamoureux

June 17, 2018 at 7:11 AM

You have Indeed enchanted me with this gem.

Eve Roper

June 17, 2018 at 9:24 AM

Thank you, Richard :) for the inspirational compliment I always enjoy them. Let’s me know I have succeed the task correct :) Hugs Eve ~' *

Tom Cunningham

June 17, 2018 at 4:57 AM

Like spacey stuff, like this haiku too. Tom

Eve Roper

June 17, 2018 at 9:21 AM

Thank you, Tom, Hugs Eve ~' *

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