Copper Tins

copper tins on shelf
gleaming panner’s gold
— priceless faux lighting

4/2/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Trifiatis Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 8:08 AM
Profound dear, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 10:22 AM
Thanks, Demetrios!
Neumann Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 3:36 AM
I like this. What a gold/copper rush. Kai
Rodrigues Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 6:26 AM
Thanks, Kai! I am smiling :)
Krutsinger Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 11:09 PM
You are talented in so many types of poetry, but I really like the scene you have poured in front of me in this haiku, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 11:12 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Gupta Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:52 PM
We do see relatively ... Nice reflection ... Nice Haiku ...
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 9:25 PM
Thanks, Probir!
Green Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 6:51 PM
That was fun and we'll expressed. One's copper can certainly be another's gold. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:05 PM
Thanks, Chris!
Devonshire Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 5:59 PM
A priceless haiku, Kim. Just recently I have seen some amazing jewelry made of copper. A fave poem for me!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 6:02 PM
Thanks, Carolyn!
Allison Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 5:15 PM
lovely imagery Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 5:52 PM
Thanks, Jan!
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