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Cooling Flame

my sis  & her man
falling from the kissing tree 
after 5 s0me' years

how blind love can be
you are all up off in it
news sure blinded me

the mixing of oil 
and water can only float
for just so long, eh?

not be taking sides
for there is no 1 to blame
she's lost her Viking

lost his Texas belle
matches sometimes made in hell
sad the cooling flame

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/14/2010 10:04:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Kristi. I am looking forward to tomorrow and what I might read of yours again. Never let your pen lay and dry out. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/13/2010 3:29:00 PM
enjoyed reading your write today!
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