Cool Mornings

A quiet stillness
That the fog reinforces;
Peaceful cool mornings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 19, 2008 at 8:27 PM
Steve, Very well written Haiku Your Friend Raul told me about YOU and YOUR 2 other Friends So much can be said in this Japanese Form It seems YOU and YOUR FRIENDS are taking Haiku to a higher Level Keep Writing YOUR fellow HAIKUER...HG
Neal Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 11:43 AM
This is good too....I can't wait til you post more. DN
Neal Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 11:25 AM
This is an excellent haikum. Nice 5-7-5 flow on it too. Your work is peaceful and refreshing. Relaxation is felt through your words. Keep up the good work.
Moreno Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 12:16 AM
The scene you have painted is very tranquil. Mornings are so peaceful and pleasant...good job...Raul
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December 13, 2008 at 11:56 PM
Ah! ...the tranquillity of early morning. You have captured the stillness very well here. Well done Steve! Best wishes, Keith
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