William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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Cool Master Lil' Miss

Cool Master Lil' Miss

Shiloh's art-filled hoodie argyle,
warmly snugs young miss, save Charlie,
he rallies firm, quick briefs the term,
timely step shifts the sundial,
gray culls while golden spears briefly,
while life roams its normal lifestyle,
e'er discerning events may change,
as felled leaves crowd in a stockpile,
squashing in passing was gnarly,
quick briefs the term, he rallies firm,
her hand in his made all worthwhile.

2021 March 09

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Anisha Dutta April 9, 2021 at 11:04 AM Gone thru n enjoyed. Sure to try your contest. Blessing William Kelii Kekaula April 9, 2021 at 12:34 PM It is difficult with 'reversed lines', but I have faith in you, Anisha, Aloha!

Beata Agustin April 6, 2021 at 12:19 AM Thanks for sharing this, along with its message: "... life roams its normal lifestyle" and quaint poetic format, exemplifying what your contest requires... Hope to have mine finalized. God bless you. William Kelii Kekaula April 6, 2021 at 1:08 AM Thank you, Beata, I know that when Joseph May had that reversed lines contest, the entry pace was taxing as it seems to be the case again, I hope you'll be able to get it in my friend, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues March 21, 2021 at 7:32 PM I love that first line! William Kelii Kekaula March 21, 2021 at 7:35 PM Glad to know that, Kim, my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2021 at 12:42 PM oh good. I am able to understand what the R lines mean from seeing your example, William . THANKS for the model poem. William Kelii Kekaula March 14, 2021 at 2:13 PM I hope you will give this form a try and much thanks truly, Andrea, Aloha!