Mitch White Poet Haiku

Cool Cat

.                                                  I bite you, water

                                          Tigers do more than just jump

                                               we are swimming fools

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Andrea Dietrich November 28, 2010 at 12:33 AM swimming fools and cool cool cats!!

Doris Culverhouse May 3, 2010 at 6:45 AM I missed this picture...sounds nice.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 3, 2010 at 2:45 AM love this "cool" take on the pic! very different, very fun too :) I hope the tiger didn't swallow too much water ;) thanks for your comments, sure am happy to have made you laugh :)

Charmaine Chircop May 3, 2010 at 12:38 AM Mitch,the i bite you,made me chucle. . .i love your view about the tiger,mucho enjoyed,Charma:)

Poet Destroyer A May 2, 2010 at 9:40 PM nice one, i did not even now tigers swam till i saw the pick, loved it,..p..d

April 30, 2010 at 4:07 PM Got a chuckle out of this one. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 30, 2010 at 11:40 AM Hey Mitch this is a great depiction of the tiger photo... I bypassed the water and solely concentrated on the tiger hunt for prey.. with Survival Sequence... luv luv luv.. your title ..it alone should win big..luv.. and good luck..."Sweetheart"