Kim Van Breda Poet Rhyme

Cool Blue Destiny

COOL BLUE DESTINY

a cool blue crystal daybreak as
moon departs shimmering stars
on the sea

in silhouette they stand alone
warm from inside out they swig
down brandy

seagulls cry their morning pleas
gather swiftly orbiting boat
drifting free

fishing rods wait hooked with bait
as glistening scales glide by
decoys plea

oceans bounty captured as
frantic wide eyed last breaths meet
destiny










© Kim van Breda—May 2014

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Richard Lamoureux May 29, 2014 at 10:35 AM Where the fisherman claimed by the sea??? Kim Van Breda May 29, 2014 at 12:01 PM Another stanza for justification?? OK, will work on that :)