Cookies

Cookies are addictive! OoOoH! Here's one to snatch! Okay...where's the chocolate chips? Kraving too many of these treats I want some now! But...I might get beeefy... Every bite is mouthwatering, soft and crisp Should I take another cookie?

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Date: 7/12/2014 1:59:00 AM

I have about a thousand views on this poem! Thanks guyz so very much! YAY! COOKIES ARE ADDICTIVE AND COOL! (: ~ Feel free to read more of my verses.

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/6/2014 7:30:00 PM

11th on the list: You know, David? Cookie Monster is one of my all-time favorite characters. It's such a creative concept and this piece can pass as an ode for him. Also, I can see you stealing and eating those cookies the way he always does. OMNOMNOMNOMNOM!!!

J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/4/2013 9:02:00 PM

THANKX POETZ! :DD I have about 600 views on this particular poem! Thankx for all of you guyz support! ~~ DWB

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2013 2:02:00 PM

- Take one .... take four .... take everyone David, a nice poem from you (to me), thanks. - Have a wonderful Easter. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

J.W. Earnings
Date: 3/31/2013 1:21:00 PM

haha you're silly! Thanks for your sweet comments. I actually don't celebrate Easter, but I hope you have a good one. ENJOY your spring break and have a joyous week. -DWB