David William Breidenthal Poet Acrostic

Cookies

Cookies are addictive!
OoOoH! Here's one to snatch!
Okay...where's the chocolate chips?
Kraving too many of these treats
I want some now! But...I might get beeefy...
Every bite is mouthwatering, soft and crisp
Should I take another cookie?

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David William Breidenthal July 12, 2014 at 1:59 AM I have about a thousand views on this poem! Thanks guyz so very much! YAY! COOKIES ARE ADDICTIVE AND COOL! (: ~ Feel free to read more of my verses.

Jake Ponce May 6, 2014 at 7:30 PM 11th on the list: You know, David? Cookie Monster is one of my all-time favorite characters. It's such a creative concept and this piece can pass as an ode for him. Also, I can see you stealing and eating those cookies the way he always does. OMNOMNOMNOMNOM!!!

David William Breidenthal May 4, 2013 at 9:02 PM THANKX POETZ! :DD I have about 600 views on this particular poem! Thankx for all of you guyz support! ~~ DWB

Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2013 at 2:02 PM - Take one .... take four .... take everyone David, a nice poem from you (to me), thanks. - Have a wonderful Easter. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) David William Breidenthal March 31, 2013 at 1:21 PM haha you're silly! Thanks for your sweet comments. I actually don't celebrate Easter, but I hope you have a good one. ENJOY your spring break and have a joyous week. -DWB