Conversation

Hello? Is Jack there?
Speaking...who is calling please?
I am Jack too, with something important to share.
Really? Your name is Jack and you have something to say to me?

Jack, I know all about your life
All your troubles and all your strife,
I know what happens in your head,
What you enjoy and what you dread .

How can you know all these things?
Only I know who I really am.
How I deal with what life brings,
And whether I fall or stand .

Jack, I know all you have done and said
Because I am you 25 years ahead.
I was there ,I heard those voices
And I am the result of each of those choices.

You are me? How can it be?
Almost too hard to believe.
Yes I am you, a more seasoned you
With more than just a pointer or two.

Well thanks for calling 
I appreciate that,
Now about my life
Let's chat!

9/6/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 8:14 AM
Next to last verse, change "to" to "too". What a fun poem, a chat with yourself. That would be strange. I wonder if Jack and Jack will argue? LOL
Eldridge Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Thanks Kim We do
Rycroft Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 6:34 AM
Ha ha great conversation well done x
Eldridge Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Thank you
Nyaga Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 5:40 AM
An interesting write.. i enjoyed.. //blessings
Eldridge Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading
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