Control, To Have Or To Lack

this emotion that i feel,
is it hope or is it death.
i think that ive got full control,
then take my final breath.

I wish upon my star,
And try hard to stay strong.
I think that I've got full control,
Then break down writing songs.

In my own space I think,
Trembling to myself.
I dwell on what has happened, 
Then I hide it on my shelf.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 5, 2011 at 2:18 PM
a deep and strong write this is Chelsea, good flow of rhyme, enjoyed,..p.d.
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February 5, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Well written, Chelsea
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