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Control

~Control~ 
(Quatrain) 


Learn to control yourself and you'll be fine 
Losing control is bad, denotes lack of discipline 
You can't control others but you can control the self 
Why control others when you can't even control yourself 

You can control many things like a regular machine 
Controlling people, well that's another story 
There are things and events that are out of our hands 
Man can't control nature, so why try to get that glory 

Giving advice is good to give to others when asked 
But trying to control everything is simply a mistake 
Trying to control other lives is just a foolish dream 
Lack of control and discipline brings only heartache 

Behaviour and temper you should control all the time 
When you're out of control you're not thinking fine 
Lack of judgment comes from a mind out of control 
Practice self-control and then your life will shine 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2009 




January,2,2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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