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Look in the mirror what do you see? A life full of mystery. Staring at myself and it is like i am looking right threw Not knowing what I should do next I grab my hairbrush that's when I had an Epiphany realizing that the world is still within my control I can do as I please for no one is stopping me. Seven lines contest cory long

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Date: 5/5/2011 9:28:00 PM
Good one here as well. Good luck on the contest. R.M.
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Date: 5/5/2011 8:10:00 AM
Awesome wisdom come upon u Cory and utilize is well ... control is a great quality if used in the right vein luv.. u have a handle on it my friend..
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Date: 5/4/2011 4:04:00 PM
You are as free as the mocking bird.. and brave n tall as a tree...(spiritually) your limit is only thought n word.. pretty bird fly free.. xo Don
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Date: 5/4/2011 1:05:00 PM
Wishing you the best in the contest. I enjoyed reading it today Cory. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2011 8:55:00 PM
beautiful piece of poetry. thank you for commenting on Heart of Gold
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Date: 5/3/2011 6:59:00 PM
A brave girl with determined resolutions in life. God bless you, Cory
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