Cory Long Poet Rhyme

Control

Look in the mirror what do you see?
A life full of mystery.
Staring at myself and it is like i am looking right threw
Not knowing what I should do next 
I grab my hairbrush that's when I had an Epiphany
realizing that the world is still within my control 
I can do as I please for no one is stopping me.



Seven lines contest 
cory long

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Matt Hunt May 5, 2011 at 9:28 PM Good one here as well. Good luck on the contest. R.M.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 5, 2011 at 8:10 AM Awesome wisdom come upon u Cory and utilize is well ... control is a great quality if used in the right vein luv.. u have a handle on it my friend..

Don Johnson May 4, 2011 at 4:04 PM You are as free as the mocking bird.. and brave n tall as a tree...(spiritually) your limit is only thought n word.. pretty bird fly free.. xo Don

Carol Sunshine Brown May 4, 2011 at 1:05 PM Wishing you the best in the contest. I enjoyed reading it today Cory. Love, Carol

James Foulk May 3, 2011 at 8:55 PM beautiful piece of poetry. thank you for commenting on Heart of Gold

Dr.Ram Mehta May 3, 2011 at 6:59 PM A brave girl with determined resolutions in life. God bless you, Cory