Control

Crazy, i'm burning hot
I just can not stop
thinking, wondering, losing
My mind, it's mine, but not
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Neshat Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 3:42 PM
Good expressive of thoughts.
Gumbo Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 5:50 AM
Bravo! You are in good company my friend ;) Spirit loves a poet...
Anderson Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 4:28 AM
this a great piece. lasr line is awesome
Chircop Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 3:24 PM
well penned-charma
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