Carla Ingram Poet I do not know?

Control

Control! Why I say!
It does not make great

Control! It tends to go to peoples head sometimes
It is really a state of mind

Control! Can be evil ,can be good
If we use it in the right way
Like we should

Control! Will make you run of and leave your self
Thinking I do not need no help

Control! Will cause you to loose the one closes to you heart
    Because all you like to do is tear them apart

Control! Is a something else you see
It can take over you, or take over me!!!

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Miranda Hawley January 18, 2020 at 2:28 PM You left control as an open verb as in open to either good or bad. You painted more reasons on the bad side of control than on the good side of control. That said nice job in thinking the concept through.