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       Breathe - -  you say
   
   craving to capture the air inside my being- to the point of no return
             (holding me hostage) to my needs, this ache inside
     stimulating the senses, crumbling all of my defenses


                              Stay - - you say
  
   as breathing becomes rapid, as the yearning within, begins to burn
                 - does this signify it is the right moment,
              (to give in to you) to my desires?
                 

                  If so,
                           then take my breath away,
                                   breathe me in,
                                deeply and more

                     Before I am completely breathless            
   
 
          I softly say - -
                                             
                            You are in Control



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~ Just a little Scribble ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/12/2019 12:08:00 PM
A wonderful poem - very sensual, and breathtakingly terrific! beautifully penned Brandy. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/12/2019 7:03:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer. Such a wonderful comment. Your thoughts are always appreciated. Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/10/2019 7:01:00 PM
Giving control to another..sharing the beauty that is yourself...calm, cool and completely breathless...
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Date: 5/10/2019 11:17:00 PM
Your thoughts are so beautiful. Thank you Kim. Such a wonderful comment. I appreciate your kindness. :) Brandy
Date: 5/5/2019 6:38:00 AM
I'm missing your precious pen... I hope all is well with you..
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Date: 5/5/2019 7:09:00 PM
All is well in my world. Life has been keeping me busy lately. Thank you Silent One. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy
Date: 5/4/2019 11:47:00 PM
My a very good verse :-). Now I need to cool off :-)
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Date: 5/5/2019 6:56:00 PM
:) Thank you Eve. I hope you were able to cool off, after reading this little scribble of mine. Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy
Date: 5/4/2019 1:21:00 AM
A Sensuous write - almost like a scene out of 50 shades of grey but you made the poem 50 shades of Brandy Nicole's talented poem - I love this write. An absolute fave for me! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/4/2019 7:01:00 PM
Oh my!!! I had no idea this could be viewed in this way. Your thoughts make me smile and blush. :) Thank you Jennifer for your wonderful comment and for placing this in your favorites. My best to you! ~ Brandy
Date: 5/2/2019 1:16:00 AM
Wow, if only I could scribble like this. Bravo Brandy :)....Maria Hugs
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/2/2019 11:26:00 AM
Thank you Maria. Such a wonderful comment. :) You can scribble in this way. You are very talented with your pen. ~ Brandy
Date: 4/29/2019 1:58:00 PM
sensual and beautiful.... your scribbles make the heart soften...
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Date: 4/29/2019 7:32:00 PM
Thank you Silent One. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 4/29/2019 6:49:00 AM
Desires breathe life into passion...Wonderful write Brandy..
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Date: 4/29/2019 7:31:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. Moments truly are breathtaking. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 4/29/2019 5:32:00 AM
You always seem to take our breath away Brandy. Your writes are so beautiful, they do it to us almost every time. Hoping you are doing well. Charlie :)
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Date: 4/29/2019 7:29:00 PM
Awe, thank you Charlie. Such a wonderful thing to say. My thoughts are always from the heart. All is well here in my world. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 4/28/2019 6:36:00 AM
Well... I can get you some oxygen, perhaps a resuscitator lol...I love the way you breathe and write, Brandy...happy breathing...^WW^...{*J*}
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Date: 4/28/2019 7:16:00 PM
Perhaps I am needing more oxygen. :) Thank you my Warrior with Wings. I am breathing better now. Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy
Date: 4/25/2019 1:54:00 AM
Breathless Brandy, This is beautiful...thank you Panagiota
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Date: 4/25/2019 11:42:00 AM
Thank you Panagiota. Such a wonderful comment. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 4/24/2019 10:07:00 AM
Good morning ma'am, hope all is well in your world. I apologize for my absence in commenting on your works. It looks like I have missed several wonderful pieces. This one is a beauty. I don't know if there is a better feeling than when one is left breathless by the touch of want and passion and flames...TAH
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/24/2019 11:00:00 AM
Hi Tobey, I am doing good and all is well here in my world. It's okay, no need to apologize. Life keeps us busy, and I understand that. You are right, it is a wonderful feeling indeed, being left breathless- almost speechless. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 4/23/2019 11:31:00 AM
The ache for love can be strong when the one you love is near, perhaps stimulated by a tender touch, a soft caress. At what point do you say yes to your desires? A very romantic and sensual scribble my dear friend. Emotions spoken from your heart. John
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/23/2019 12:58:00 PM
Even though the being tingles in delight, that ache to give in, the heart knows when the time is right. When to say yes. :) Thank you John. I appreciate you and your kind words. ~ Brandy
Date: 4/23/2019 7:46:00 AM
You scribble in the most romantic of ways.
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Date: 4/23/2019 11:16:00 AM
Awe, thank you Victor. :) Such a sweet thing to say. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Date: 4/23/2019 7:27:00 AM
A lovely romantic depiction, Brandy..a dance of desires leading to ultimate surrender. I am keeping this scribble in my FAVE.
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Date: 4/23/2019 11:15:00 AM
Yielding to that hunger, the longing hibernating deep inside- the irresistible sensation of love. Yes, to sweetly surrender indeed! Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your thoughts. Thank you for placing this in your favorites. :) Brandy
Date: 4/23/2019 7:27:00 AM
A very powerful scroll, how often we feel this way when we are enraptured with someone, Nice poetry today, Have a good one, and thank you for sharing your talent.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/23/2019 10:03:00 AM
Thank you Pixie. Love is a powerful emotion, as it can leave one breathless. In absolute bliss. I hope you have a wonderful day. Many blessings to you. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 4/23/2019 6:17:00 AM
Wow...the desire of many to give in to love...and it's in the breath of life...You capture the emotion...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/23/2019 9:42:00 AM
Such a wonderful way to view love. As, "A breath of life" Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Thank you Arturo. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 4/22/2019 11:26:00 PM
Very alluring, even a little seductive. Another very fetching little scribble.
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Date: 4/22/2019 11:46:00 PM
Very exhilarating collecting a moment such as this. Thank you Lawrence. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy