Notes About The Poem

THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

Contrasts An Open Verse

CONTRASTS
intuitive
enthralling
 with the startlin
discoveringstartling
of
 commonality

paired together
  receptive
&
so highly
 esoteric
& radiant

 a mystical theosophy
 developing
exceptional
possibilities
of
controversial comparisons
yet 
is profound
tactful
with
considerations
tinged
in an elegiac
mood

 juxtaposed
  individuality
unfurled
in
 inscrutable
mysterious
shadows

 marks
 the sense
of being
in
magnificent
rectilinear
  strokes

marvellous
 engrossing
& illuminating
 throughout
the
mind
& consciousness
in
the
mystery journey
so
  wondrous
to fascinate
  the lyricism
in
the complexity
 of time 
light
&space
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