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Two toddlers laughing and playing in the sand with balls and toys.
Their sweet friendly nature, being together, each one enjoys.

As the two friends grew and are now all of seven,
One’s parents are loving, the others are in heaven.

One has pretty clothes and views the world with delight.
One yearns for kind words and a hug at night.

Life goes by and now the two are turning eight,
Watching for someone to love her, one child will wait.

Music and dancing and parties are all part of life for one.
One is lucky to be an orphan when all is said and done.

For her life could have been worse with an addicted mother.
But its outings and dolls and making a fairy garden for the other.

Life mooches on now they are ten, life is glitter and ballet shoes,
Or its second-hand clothes and pre-loved toys to amuse.

Wonder there is now, being a teen, with jewelry and brand name jeans.
For some that is, and for others, growing up fast is what it means.

One looks forward to prom dresses, friends and dates with boys.
The other looks back to playing in the sand, laughing with balls and toys.
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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 3:46 PM
Hello Speaks Volumes, These two girls have different lives. One has everything. the other does not. One is happy and the other remembers the past of good times. Hugs. /Darlene/
Radice Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 12:16 AM
I really like how you've structured this Wendy. I often look back and remember the very simple pleasures from childhood that I truly believe helped shape my thinking and view on life today. Never has "less is more" be proven to be right. The last couplet stands out. Cheers - Gary
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