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A person once so strong is broken and weak minded. She walks with her head down, showing everyone around her, her weakness and pain as they point and laugh and call her names. But she takes it, all of it someone already has complete control of her, what more is there to lose. She's lost her hope, and faith, she's lost her mind, her sanity is gone, and she can't move on

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Date: 6/16/2011 1:36:00 AM
good thing i chose this to read today.. a very introspective write, chelsea.. :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 11/3/2010 10:42:00 AM
Thank you for posting your poetry that we may all enjoy it here at PoetrySoup Chelsea. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2010 1:39:00 PM
Nice picture of a perosn who has lost hope, faith and sanity, Chelsea
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