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Constellations

"Constellations"

6 September 2016

Version 1 (ABC/Rhyme not a real Nonet)

A creature built from the dust of stars
Became a living avatar
Climbing the ladder of time
Dancing to wintertime                     -6
Edify beautify                                 -6
Firefly goodbye      
Gently fly
He is
I

Version 2 (ABC/Rhyme/Nonet)

9 September 2016

A creature built from the dust of stars
By light: strength, life, an avatar
Climbing the ladder of time
Dancing to wintertime      
Embrace beautify                  
Firefly goodbye      
Gently fly
He is
I

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Winged Warrior July 21, 2017 at 9:28 AM Very well crafted my friend...god bless...^WW^ G. Jay October 28, 2017 at 2:49 PM Thanks Winged Warrior.

Sarban Bhattacharya September 9, 2016 at 3:33 AM The concluding part is beautiful, also the musical pattern, Jay. G. Jay September 10, 2016 at 3:00 AM I appreciate your comment. Thank you.