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Constant Reminder

It's easy to find fault in me I am a failure, I am imperfect God forgives and forgets But you never seem to You remind me that I lose You crush my future plans You tell me to not have hope That I should never dream Should I believe what they say? Or shall I pretend to not hear them? Should I live my life the way I want? Or will I let it be destroyed by other people thoughts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/6/2009 7:59:00 PM
honest thoughts...but a bit premature I think! you have a poet's talent! write-on!! Jim
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Date: 6/5/2009 7:55:00 PM
Darling... never listen too others... its your life... they cant control how successful you shall become... be strong-Aurel
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