Constant Reminder

It's easy to find fault in me
I am a failure, I am imperfect
God forgives and forgets 
But you never seem to

You remind me that I lose
You crush my future plans
You tell me to not have hope
That I should never dream

Should I believe what they say?
Or shall I pretend to not hear them?
Should I live my life the way I want?
Or will I let it be destroyed by other people thoughts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 7:59 PM
honest thoughts...but a bit premature I think! you have a poet's talent! write-on!! Jim
Henderson Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 7:55 PM
Darling... never listen too others... its your life... they cant control how successful you shall become... be strong-Aurel
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