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“The breath of life is in the sunlight and the hand of life is in the wind.” – Kahlil Gibran, The Prophet

Conspire: "to breathe together" [Word origin: Latin conspirare, to breathe together, agree, unite < com-, together + spirare, to breathe: see spirit]

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A Sam Scott poem:
11th January 2024
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I want to be closer As close as your breath The heartbeat that separates The living from death A touch as electric As life flows, it seems This story is written In pages and reams I want to feel whispers So near they are warm Assurance and promise The shelter from storm Safe, caring nuzzle Intimate speech Gentle and loving No poem can reach Caress of a mother A hug from a friend The presence of hope That no fear can contend I want to be mindful Hold the words in my head For the silence of closeness Says far more than is said

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 1/19/2024 7:02:00 AM

That's a great write. Loved it. I hope you are doing great.

Sam Scott
Date: 1/19/2024 8:54:00 AM

Thank you! I am, and bless you for stopping by I really appreciate it :)

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/12/2024 2:22:00 PM

Loved this poem Sam and so enjoyed your narration which enhances it further. The pictures accompanies it so well. The poem flows beautifully with wonderful, deep, reflective lines throughout. ‘ I want to feel whispers’’ The presence of hope’’ I want to be mindful’. I especially relate to the last two lines -‘ silence is golden’. So enjoyed this thoughtful piece. Thank you. Blessings to you :):)

Sam Scott
Date: 1/12/2024 2:52:00 PM

This is quite wonderful feedback, Christina, truly grateful x I was surprised at the origins of the word seemingly with negative connotations, yet beautiful in a new way to me. Thank you so much. Blessings ;))

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/11/2024 2:54:00 PM

such a soft and evocative poem, Sam. There's an ever-growing need for sincere mindfulness and compassion in today's world. I'm like you...I want to be mindful, hold the words in my head, for the silence of closeness says far more than is said.' Am faving this one because it resonated with me.

Sam Scott
Date: 1/11/2024 8:11:00 PM

Dear Sara, that is such an encouragement x and yes some thoughtfulness can go a long way and costs so little. We should pause far more. Hugs :)

Ink Empress

Date: 1/11/2024 7:02:00 AM

A very lyrical poem this is and flows in such a delicate manner which depicts longing for light and love: yes many need to be mindful but only few are aware that they need to: its always good to see someone acknowledge their need for mindfulness, and not just throw words around. Silence definitely says more than words can. And i love also the opening lines: very evocative poem this is: flows seamlessly! Pleasure always reading your sincere and soulful writes.

Sam Scott
Date: 1/11/2024 7:13:00 AM

I am glad you like it dear Ink.. it means a lot to me. Thank you :-) I am always glad when you stop by!

Sam Scott

Date: 1/11/2024 3:08:00 AM

Inspired by BBC Radio 4 "Thought for the Day" [11.1.24] by Rhidian Brook, Author: https://www.bbc.co.uk/sounds/play/p0h4c3cg