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Consistent Punctual

"Time marches on", consistent punctual Bodies' cells repair keeping up for while Then like morn's sky changes slower renewal Body ages no longer agile Acceptance of life's blows or Adam's sin Makes getting older easier knowing There is a better place than this has been Where no more physical decline showing "Time marches on", consistent punctual I'll live each day doing best_most I can With riches laid up gaining accrual While I wear the soft shoes, sit on divan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/21/2012 7:14:00 PM
Sara, I perceive a mature, seasoned lady as the writer of this fine poem (and rhyme is to my liking) as only a person who's been there, done that is able to write this well. Something at least, that youth is denied. Nice write!
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Date: 6/20/2012 10:49:00 AM
Times refreshes the spirit. .I like your idea.goodmorning! ~always&forever Lynette
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Date: 6/18/2012 4:24:00 PM
Till you sit on the Divine divan eh Sara.." pleased to read you tonight; Joe..)
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Date: 6/16/2012 4:10:00 PM
Hello, Sara, many encouraging thoughts...pd
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Date: 6/16/2012 12:28:00 PM
lovely thoughtful write, Sara
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Date: 6/16/2012 10:04:00 AM
A beautiful poem you have here. I love your last stanza. Time don't stand still. It marches on. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 6/16/2012 2:59:00 AM
aww a lovley poem, and thanks for your kind comments too
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Date: 6/15/2012 6:14:00 PM
sweet Sara,loved it oxox
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Date: 6/15/2012 5:08:00 PM
I really enjoyed this awakening of age! We all get older, but someday...age won't show anymore and time will not be! Awesome write my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/15/2012 4:27:00 PM
Eloquent and beautiful Sara. You have been blessed my friend. Peace be with you.
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