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Consequences Unforeseen

Young and wild Just wanting to be seen Doing things she knew little about Consequences unforeseen Her parents did what they thought best For their beloved child She returned home a different girl A sorrowful being…no longer wild Life was good ….she was fulfilled The years passed happily by Yet there was a constant ache and emptiness A loss and grief that did not subside It took so long to organise Now the day was finally here A whirlwind of emotions consumed her Nerves ,uncertainty, fear As she nervously approached He turned and smiled Before her stood her baby boy A man….with his arms opened wide!

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Date: 10/19/2023 9:53:00 AM
Whether real or imagined, it is undeniable that you have personally felt these intense emotions. This poem is a beautiful masterpiece, overflowing with vivid imagery and evocative language. It truly deserves to be embraced with warm hugs and tender cuddles.
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Deb M
Date: 10/19/2023 1:11:00 PM
Thankyou so much Lasaad! Appreciated as always….Debx
Date: 10/18/2023 8:26:00 PM
Quite a narrative, Deb! Heartfelt, inspiring, and moving. Wonderful penning. Thank you, Gershon
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Date: 10/19/2023 1:10:00 PM
Quite the compliment from you BB haha! Thankyou my friend! Debx
Date: 10/18/2023 3:53:00 PM
This sprung tears to my eyes, it is beautiful Deb. The emotions flowed from your pen to my heart! Hugs sweet lady <3
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Date: 10/19/2023 1:09:00 PM
Oh thankyou lovely BJ….you are so sweet! Debx
Date: 10/18/2023 2:16:00 AM
Fiction or not, you must have experienced those emotions, A splendid poem. You deserve cuddles. Blessings
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Deb M
Date: 10/19/2023 1:08:00 PM
Thanks Victor….Debx
Date: 10/17/2023 4:14:00 PM
A very tender poem full of love from both you and your son, Shirley XX
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Date: 10/17/2023 4:18:00 PM
Hi Shirley…..this is fiction my lovely friend! Thankyou….Debx l will send you an update travel email as soon as l can xxx
Date: 10/17/2023 3:44:00 PM
I know this story in the real...and the happy ending. Great read!
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Date: 10/20/2023 1:35:00 PM
Cheers Joe….Debx
Date: 10/17/2023 3:22:00 PM
what a beautiful unfolding and engaging poem...the last line grabbed me and pulled on my heartstrings. Nicely done, Deb...enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 10/20/2023 1:34:00 PM
Thankyou so much Sara for such a lovely comment! Debx
Date: 10/17/2023 3:18:00 PM
Oh, my Deb. You got me where the tears flow.
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Date: 10/20/2023 1:34:00 PM
Oh Lin lm sorry hehe! Looking mighty fine in your new profile photo! Debx

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