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Consciousness

In the days that progress All will be put to the test If you find that you can see the way things were and have to be There are clues, left all around If you seek, they can be found Don't be discreet, hold out your hand Then just maybe, you'll understand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/20/2015 3:13:00 PM
Very good. You have conveyed quite a profound message in so few words.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 1/20/2015 5:43:00 PM
Thank you Ed, there's more to come

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