Conscious Pain

Everywhere I go,

I am plagued with thoughts of you:

Your absence haunts me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 5:32 AM
Very thought provoking write that you have presented in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.."Butterfly" which is about a butterfly with the common name of "Dog Face" because there is a profile of a dog on each wing in the prettiest sunflower yellow color...Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 5:31 AM
sounds sad, and longing
Chircop Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 9:56 PM
Deep and full of emotion Raul..Charma
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March 14, 2010 at 3:06 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this one. Fitting title. I'm sure most will relate to a time like this in their lives. Keep on writing! Karen
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