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Conscious Pain

Everywhere I go, I am plagued with thoughts of you: Your absence haunts me.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2010 5:32:00 AM

Very thought provoking write that you have presented in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.."Butterfly" which is about a butterfly with the common name of "Dog Face" because there is a profile of a dog on each wing in the prettiest sunflower yellow color...Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/15/2010 5:31:00 AM

sounds sad, and longing

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/14/2010 9:56:00 PM

Deep and full of emotion Raul..Charma

Date: 3/14/2010 3:06:00 PM

The emotion comes through your words in this one. Fitting title. I'm sure most will relate to a time like this in their lives. Keep on writing! Karen