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Conquer Heart craves to weep, Emotions dying of cheat, In firm grip of sadness, Going crazy in madness, Is what depression means ! Just a bit of courage, Self assessment to encourage, Knowing world is bad, Life is both cheers and sad, Is what elevates the mood ! Too much if you expect, Always in end will regret, Roses that you loved, thorns are hand in glove, Is what you need to ponder! Your own self you need to conquer, No pills needed, why to surrender, To defeat any forces that subdue, To negative thoughts must bid adieu, Dictionary with no antonyms ? That's what in the end you will get !! Written December 9th, 2014 For contest'Fighting depression' for Linda Sponsor- Shadow Hamilton Awarded 8th place

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Date: 12/27/2014 10:42:00 AM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your win. I'm finally making time to read every entry, intended for me in Shadow's Hamilton depression contest. It was a tough fight, however at the end I prayed, and asked to take over and he did. WOW, it was what I call a miracle. Thanks for lifting my day with this poem... Love LINDA
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Date: 12/10/2014 3:33:00 AM
fine message for PD, dr.upma.. congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/9/2014 9:52:00 PM
I loved this, I just read your comments, this could be "the 200 year war" Great write!
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:16:00 PM
Nice tribute paid to PD, congrats on he win
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Date: 12/9/2014 1:58:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 12/9/2014 1:07:00 PM
Hi Dr. Sharma, Very wise words. Very well constructed tribute for PD. Also: Congratulations on your excellent win. Take care. Earl
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Date: 12/9/2014 12:31:00 PM
Wonderfully written, Dr. Upma! Much inspiration and encouragement offered in your words. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:40:00 AM
A great creation my good friend! Adding this one to my fav as it rings true and inspires my mind to write. Definite super 7 from me!
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:02:00 AM
congrats on win Dr Upma lovely poem hugs
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Date: 12/9/2014 7:50:00 AM
So well written my dear Dr. Upma! Food for thought, indeed! Good luck in the contest... love and hugs XXXX
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