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Connoisseur

Note: this poem is in the form of 'bref double' but they don't have it on the list.


You are a connoisseur of wine and eyes
Are you looking at me, through me, or past me?
A living ghost with formidable prowess
Or is sight in your head and are you blind?

Though your intention is to render a scene
Art is in the eye of the beholder of thine
The stories that you tell by sitting so serene
Form the labyrinth to unravel in your mind. 

The desert of your hair is swallowed by famished skies
They are an inky throbbing throat of greed
Each swell of hair a mound of desert gone to seed
Wild man you are redeemer to your kind

Are you an artist or is art your disguise?
The famished skies render you powerless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 2, 2015 at 11:52 PM
Casey, Interesting topic, poem and win. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Goodnight ~LINDA~
Boardman Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Just wanted to say thank you to all for your kind congratulations...was a wonderful surprise to hop on here this morning and discover my placing :)
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January 2, 2015 at 2:57 PM
Just wanted to say thank you to all for your kind congratulations...was a wonderful surprise to hop on here this morning and discover my placing :)
Kayode Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 10:59 AM
Congrats Casey,it is your year of winning,in poetry and all, have a wonderful 2015...huggs
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 10:27 AM
superb imagry and I love the form you used for the poem have never seen it before - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 3:36 PM
well writen,Casey, a connoisseur or a disgiuse Blessings and a Happy New Year
Boardman Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 7:25 PM
Thank you Eve. New Years Blessings to you too.
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December 28, 2014 at 3:26 PM
Hi Casey. I like this. I don't know why as it is not my normal sort of poetry but I do. Possibly because I've never read poetry of this sort before. Thank you for writing it and sharing.
Boardman Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 7:26 PM
Thank you Micheal. I'm glad to have introduced you to some new poetry:)
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