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Connections Seen

"Connections Seen" Tried to write a song on an invisible page… But the words dropped off and fell off its stage… Connections that only two can see… Absorbed in waters floating free… Feelings scribed like stars behind a cloud… Anywhere and everywhere even felt in a crowd… Writing in riddles that only two eyes could understand… What were left on a plate are dreams from my hand… Taste a few and memories will outline your lips… That's the reality of two passing ships… ~MJF~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/18/2012 6:37:00 PM
Wonderful write Micheal! Hugs
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Date: 11/9/2012 9:12:00 PM
STUNNING IMAGERY AND STELLAR WORDS EXCITE THE MIND OF THIS POETESS MICHAEL LUV .. OUR CONNECTION IS BEYOND THE NORM .. A SPECIAL LINK HOLDS US TOGETHER LUV .. JG IN SLEEPY MODE NOW AS OUR POWER IS STILL PLAYING TRICKS ON AND OFF WHENEVER ..OH .. NITE MY WK AS JG DREAMS OF LUV .. FOREVER XOXO
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Date: 11/9/2012 4:30:00 PM
Michael, feeling is believing.. Love reading this one once again...xox~pd
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Date: 11/7/2012 11:54:00 AM
I love the ending, brings this full circle. Love the message in this one MJF. Hope you and your wife are doing okay ;) love & hugs CTH
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Date: 11/6/2012 8:23:00 PM
Hello Michael, nice to see you here. I love your poem... pd
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Date: 11/6/2012 5:41:00 PM
This is a very nice poem with a very good ryhme. thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 11/6/2012 10:31:00 AM
An excellent write that I enjoyed reading today Michael. I hope to have more time in the future to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2012 9:02:00 AM
This is a blessed and a wondrously perfected write my friend! I thought you portrayed a heart in an amazing form here Michael! The words you used didn't drop off the page here, they stayed to make a tremendous poem! You've done a marvelous job with this piece, what a powerful poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/6/2012 7:51:00 AM
:) Nice Rhyme Michael, take care, and God bless your writing, you are so gifted. Cindy
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Date: 11/6/2012 7:50:00 AM
Hi Michael nice to see you safe and posting again . Like it xx
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